For my portfolio I chose to revise my argument analysis. The strengths of my argument analysis were that I made some good points and I clearly put some thought and effort. The weakness were that I did not clarify my points and my evidence was not clearly tied to my thesis.
When revising my essay, I am going to clarify any and all pieces of evidence found within my supporting paragraphs. I am going to do so my asking myself how I could reword the information so that I might be able to understand if I were a reader of my own paper. For my personal response, I will relate the analysis section to my own personal experience with searching for a college. Overall, I plan to make the idea of the authors' bias writing be known throughout the paper.
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